10/01/2015

My first completed essays

My first completed essays for English 2!

          I have this one friend who checks my blog frequently (probably the only one who reads it currently), and I kinda thought about them when I wrong my paragraph on music… Oops. So here it is:

Music is a large part of my life. Whether singing in my choir or playing the piano, I enjoy music thoroughly. Whisking me away to my happy place, piano songs thrust emotion into me. Captivating and intriguing in every way, songs force my mind into a state of fearlessness. Whatever songs I play change the way I think. Playing, pondering, listening, marking my music: these are the things that completely collect and collaborate my brain. Choir clears my mind. Melodies and lyrics take me far away from school and help me clear my mind. Much like piano, the notes that I sing float into my head and extract any worry or fear that clogs it. Although sometimes I do not have enough time to play or sing, I know next time that I will. Music is my special place; my place no one can take me away from.

          Yes…. I’m sorry…. I wrote about Jessica again… She was the only other thing I could think of when I was thinking about something I liked to do! Alright here’s the next paragraph:


My dog, Jessica, is incredible. Whether good or bad, she has her own unique personality. Like people, Jessica often does the wrong things. Once she is caught from eating trash or trotting upstairs or even cantering out the door of the house, she puts her tail between her legs and leisurely saunters to her kennel for a timeout; she knows when she does wrong. Unlike people, Jessica likes chewing on stuffed animal toys and playing games. Here are some of her favorites: tug-of-war, catch, and squeaking plastic toys. Ripping toys to shreds, she lunges, grabs, and attacks. Although she loves the toys themselves, I’ve noticed that when I leave her to play with them by herself, her energy ceases. When I come back, her energy flares up again. She loves playing just as much as I do. Jessica is special to me in many ways.

3 comments:

  1. I feel quite similarly about music, and I loved the way you described it as an escape. Also, you are starting to make me wish I had a dog :)

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  2. Whoa! I didn't know that more than one of my friends checked this! CRAZY. I might need to be more consistent with how often I post....

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  3. Yeah! I have been checking since you told me! It had been a while and I had started to wonder if you forgot about it.

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